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The Ursa Minor Saga - Trailer Part 3

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[Elsa cries on the floor as Dipper shouts at her]

Dipper: Forgiveness?! I BEG you to love me! My heart was YOURS! My life was YOURS! and you threw me away.. I Hate you Elsa! [scene of Elsa crying alone]

[scene of Jack Frost looking shock after Elsa breaks up with him]
Elsa: Jack Frost was a mistake . [cut to Anna in Dipper's room holding Elsa's snow globe that she gave Dipper] All this time .. Dipper was there by our side. And I toss him away when he open his heart to me. I was blinded by my own heart. My cold heart for another cold heart. [cut to Elsa holding that same snow globe , now damage after Dipper destroy it after turning evil] My true love ... toss away for a meaningless flirt. a one night stand. My treasure loss.

[Elsa & Anna talk under Arandelle's underground tunnels]

Anna: Elsa, Why stay here? We are in danger! Gideon & ... Dipper .. he's ..

Elsa: Anna I know. He's gone to the dark side and it's all my fault! I could had avoided all of this. I fail to be a good Queen to everyone. I CAN'T leave . I won't leave without Dipper. [Elsa remembers evil Dipper taking pleasure in destroying the castle] Even if his heart is now black.. I know deep down is heart still beats for me. I can save him!

[scene of Elizabeth confronting Elsa in a alley]

Elizabeth: I warned you Elsa. Dipper was safe in my arms and you insisted to take him. Why should I trust you to save him? When you are the one responsible for this. When you cause him the damage I try to protect him from.

Elsa: Because I won't allow any harm to come to him. He's still my little Dipper. I love him.. I want him to know that. Even if he kills me ..

Elizabeth: Your own life for him? You do love him finally. Come then, we have a long journey. In order to save him we must find the others...

[Elsa is in a secret club with a young girl]

Isabella: you want me for HOW long?

Elsa: Whatever you charge I'll double it! Just as long as you are our transport for as long as my mission takes.

Isabella: Okay then but I want my own castle and city by the time we are done your Majesty.. So who are Dipper's others that will be looking for?

[scene cuts to a far off land, to a Chinese temple. Two girls ,one kid the other a teen sitting in the temple steps]

Elizabeth [voice]: The other Pines that can still be the hope we need to save Arandelle .. As well as the girl that can melt Dipper's frozen heart.

The final third of this part of the Ursa Minor Saga in Trailer format. We switch from Dipper's viewpoint to Elsa as she sees the monster that she has created as well as losing her kingdom to the Mad boy Gideon Gleeful.

"Anna wants to leave Arandelle and seek shelter with the rising rebellion against Gideon but Elsa wants to remain in the kingdom to save Dipper before the war begins. She confronts the Guardian Elizabeth who's already working on a mission to stop Gideon. She refuses to let Elsa join her but after Elsa confesses her love for Dipper she accepts seeing the honesty in it. Elsa goes underground at the border to seek a transport and discovers the smuggler criminal Isabella, whom she knows because she was Dipper's friend. Isabella agrees to help Elsa but only to save Dipper & demands a large payment from her , not out of greed but because she hates Elsa for breaking Dipper's heart. Elizabeth, Anna, Elsa & Isabella must avoid Gideon's rising army to search for Dipper's lost twin sister Mabel .. and Wendy the one who is the key to bringing Dipper back to the light."

As a said before , This was a story that I have made quite a while back and was not a anti-jelsa story (but the anti Jerk Frost spirit is all there). Elsa was put in the role way before this whole Jelsa thing even existed but it naturally fell into place with the similarities to my story, so in other words ... I Saw Elsa first , Jack. However what really was a inspiration on me to make this final version of the story was Finn's and Princess Bubblegum's relationship from Adventure Time.
                          Finn's speech to PB in Burning low really sums up what I felt about PB since she pretty much ignores Finn yet wants him to remain her hero which for me imply that she wanted him under her control. When I got the chance to preview some pages for "The Art of Oo" I finally got my answer to my question "Why does PB want Finn around if she does not love him?". The answer is that PB does not think it would work since Finn is a human and mortal while she is ageless. She wants Finn around because she wants to protect him while he's still young , she's not cold hearted but her mind is so into her work that she unintentionally causes damage to Finn.

Not sure if that's accurate but it when something like that which easily works for my Princess or Elsa in this version as she has good intentions. She thinks age is a problem and that she's doing a great job by having Dipper under her complete watch, not realizing it's only making him more attach to her. Jack frost is only making things worse since he makes fun of Dipper's mortality ("you'll grow old and die soon!") and only wants to get it on with Elsa so he can check out what's it like to have kids only to abandon them when he sees another younger girl or wants to go back to his old ways. He's the sort of bad guy in this story and the reason Dipper goes evil after he sees Elsa give herself up to him.
                    
The end for this however is completely new, in the draft The Princess flees and must try to recruit her former students to create a army to take back the kingdom. Here Dipper is in the role so I had to bring Mabel and Wendy in one way or another and since it's taking elements from Star Wars it was going  to have Mabel in Luke Skywalker's role. Wendy is the one thing that greatly changes this whole story since this started as a Elsa and Dipper love story. Now I can't decide if Elsa still remains as Dipper's destiny or if Wendy is the one for Dipper who can save him. The WendyXDipper ship is in reverse. Wendy falls in love when she sees Dipper from a distance in battle and Dipper sees her but he pays no attention to her since he's consume by the dark side. She makes it her mission to help Mabel to save her brother so she can made him available to her since in this scenario Wendy is just a small bystander in comparison to the other bigger characters.
 
 Might probably come back to this later but for now this part is complete & leaving this whole thing open ending for people to draw their own conclusions ...
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