Mary Sue Test with Frozen Runaway

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Over the past week, :iconariamjan: did a Mary Sue test that showed her whether her OC Raven Jane Fay is a Mary Sue trackforce.deviantart.com/jour… She past with flying colors and was even classify as a "Anti Sue" ( I didn't know it was possible for an OC to be a Anti Sue).

So seeing how well the test works as well as the very fun and interesting questions I decided to take the test myself since as someone who occasionally puts bits and pieces of my AU into my fanworks I want to make sure that my OC's are real characters and not bland Mary Sues. And see what I need to work on.

While I have a couple of them, I'm going to test my main OC Blue Oscura who has been the longest character I have written for years and have given him a definate story for him and his arc with the Frozen Crossover fic Frozen Runaway trackforce.deviantart.com/art/…

Name

Blue Oscura (Hero name - Nightfire, Also known as the Blue Ghost)

Trackforce OC - Blue Oscura - NightFire by JurassicJinx

Does your character's name have some kind of special meaning? [2 points if yes]
Blue is named after the Song "Principe Azul" (Meaning Blue Prince) from the spanish dub of Disney's Sleeping Beauty. As a boy being raised to become a Guardian of the Princesses and Queens this was intended.

POINTS: 2

F A N D O M

What is/are the main fandom(s) your character is in? [3 points if in more then 1]
Back when I created him he was made to be part of the 90's Sailor Moon anime #60 Free Icon: Usagi Tsukino (Sailor Moon) 50x50  and was a classmate civilian who was on the sidelines before he fought along Sailor Moon and over time he appeared in other canons. However recently I have given him a reboot and erase most of the decade long crossover fics to simplify his history. Right now Blue's main story doesn't stick with any main continuation for now other than the Disney films canon. The only thing he still has from his previous canon is his friendship with the Runaways

IZvMAMS by JurassicJinx

 He's kinda in the middle of these crossovers just like the other characters. Still with the crossover characters from non-Disney franchises being part of this universe let's add that as a yes.


POINTS: 5

A P P E A R A N C E


Is your character unusually attractive? [3 points]

No, he's average looking and any attraction he gets is mostly thanks to his silent stoic attitude that attract those who are often used to getting attention.

POINTS: 5

Does your character have some type of unusual characteristic? (ie. Cat ears, cat tail, unusual eye color, Unusual hair colors [fiery red, blue, white, green, rainbow, purple and pink all count]) [4 points. 5 extra for Cat features if the character is in anime fandom]
He has mostly black hair but will often have streaks of blue on him on occasion (usually when using his powers). However if taking place in my Frozen Runaway AU his most distinguishable feature are his three facial scars given to him by Elsa. They glow bright neon blue whenever he uses his powers.

POINTS: 9


Does your character's clothing resemble any canon character's? [2 points]
No. His main outfit his western inspired.

POINTS: 9

Does your character have animal characteristics? [Bat wings, animal ears, animalistic body ect...] [2 point]
I try to have him have some kind of Dinosaur like connection but this never developt beyond brainstorming.


POINTS: 9

R A C E / P O W E R S

Is your character from a place that the fandom doesn't take place in? [3 points]
Yes, the previous Crossover Universe that was erase in 2012 in his timeline by Jack Frost Jack Frost Angry Icon  
 
POINTS: 12

Is your character a demon? [3 points]
No.

POINTS: 12

Is your character related to a demon? [2 points]
No.

POINTS: 12

Is your character related to a supreme being? (ie, god/goddess, Satan, angels ect...) [6 points]
No. That's just sacrilegious and silly.
 
POINTS: 12

Does your character practice witch craft? [2 points]

No. It goes against his code.

POINTS: 12

Can your character change form? [2 points]
His main source of power and superhuman abilities, Anti-Matter energy, allows him to change into a shadow-like costume but not change his physical form or abilities beyond his appearance. I'll go with only 1 point.


POINTS: 13

A F F A I R W I T H C A N O N S

Is your character in love with a canon?

Yes.

If so; who?
Elsa. The Snow Queen who adopted him into her family. At least in this reboot.

Love Card - Elsa by JurassicJinx

Are they romantically involved? [4 points]
Eventually they do. It's complicated

Frozen Valentine's Day card boys DO want by JurassicJinx

REALLY COMPLICATED..



POINTS: 17


Do they end up having kids? [4 points]
Not there yet.


POINTS: 17

Did they get married? [2 points]
No, my continuation depends what events will happen in Frozen 2. It has to be in Canon for my Oc and AU to work and respect the Disney Universe.

POINTS: 17

Do they have flaws in their relationship? [Not worth any points]
Yes. Because of Blue's past and previous life in the universe destroyed by Jack Frost where he had many enemies he is very protective of Elsa. Elsa can handle herself and is far more powerful than Blue so she wishes that he wouldn't worry so much about her. In fact she "Protects" Blue more often then he does her.

Frozen Runaway - Night Of The Chupacabra by JurassicJinx

Especially from THAT thing.

Are there other canons who lust over your character? [4 points. Extra 3 if more than one canon lusts after your character]
Azula

Love Card - Azula by JurassicJinx
since Blue was one of the first boys she met who were nice to her despite her past. She loves him and despite his relationship with Elsa and being friends with her she doesn't see Elsa has a healthy choice for Blue, since he is very protective of her as well as the Jack Frost issue.

As for others, there's Alice can't stand it (Emoticon)  Alice Kingsleigh who he had crush on but moved on after she rejected him which came back to bite him when Alice developt feelings for him when she became a young woman.

POINTS: 24

Is your character related to any of the canons by blood? [2 points]
No.

POINTS: 24

Is your character in love with more then one canon? [2 points]
Despite his affection for Elsa he still feels for Alice and actually likes Azula but is afraid to betray his emotions for Elsa.

POINTS: 26

Has your character had past romantic relationships with other canons? [7 points]
Taking into account Alice as well as the previous Universe that was erased (which showed the existence of  Sam (4) (Totally Spies) Icon Sam from Totally Spies) let's got with yes even if that's still a mystery.

POINTS: 34

Does your character hate any of the canon characters and wishes to hurt/kill them? [6 points]
Yes, Jackson Overland Frost, a.k.a JACK FROST

Jill Frost story - Jelsa Frost origins by JurassicJinx

The Rebel Guardian Spirit who was responsible for destroying Blue's dimension in 2012 as well as now wanting to have sex with Elsa so he can be reborn as her baby and remain in a human body as well has being the entire reason Kingdom Keepers were created for. Not helping is the fact that Jack Frost is the ancestor of Blue's most dangerous rival, Devon Frost of 2099.

POINTS: 40

Has your character ever been involved with prostitution/drugs/child abuse/rape? [4 points]
No, he stops that sort of thing in Frozen Runaway when he crosses into the more gritty Earth realm and becomes a vigilante in the fictional border city of Infonavid Texas.

POINTS: 40

Has your character had any tragedy in their past? [5 points]
While he originally had a tragic past in the past Universe (you can see what that origin was here trackforce.deviantart.com/art/… ) this has yet to be developt and so far it has been the event where Elsa betrayed and slapped Blue and gave him his facial scars as Blue's only tragic event. I'll go with 3 points.

POINTS: 43

R E S U L T S


>> 43 Points <<

88= Uber sue; I'm sorry but your character is a total sue. Try not to make your character too powerful or too attractive. Maybe give your character some flaws and you can be sure to have an OC. Keep on developing your character; he/she has a lot potential.

55=87 Mary Sue. Your character is rough around the edges but with a little more polishing then your character will become a lovable OC. Maybe either give your character more or less flaws. Try to make them a bit more believable and you will have an OC.

21=54 True OC. You have a very well balanced character. Good job on having a true OC.

20 and under= Anti sue. Why are you taking this test?

My Blue Oscura is a True OC! Guess keeping his previous life and developting his modern serious and troubled persona has helped him grow as a true character.

Credit where credit is due this came from :iconariamjan: who got it from :iconlynniica: and now you can try it to see if you OC is a character or a pure sue.

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